Does my essay sound ok?
May 19th, 2009 | by Kert |Uhm besides the grammer mistakes does my essay sound ok? Im supposed to tie in how my town is intwined with Globalization.. and idk if I did it good or not… thanks ^^
Globalization affects Newcastle,Wyoming like every other town, city, state, and country. Globalization is to make in scope or application.That means when ever something affects one place, it grows and spreads through out the world. Newcastle’s main assets of funding are Refinery, Minerals, Cattle industry, Agriculture, and Tourism.
Newcastle, Wyoming has many means of funding; the most popular is the Cattle Industry and Agricultural. Many farms and ranches surround the Newcastle area. The Refinery in town distributes gas, oil, diesel, and jet fuel, all over Wyoming each year. Newcastle is surrounded by the Black Hills, each summer there are many tourists that visit Newcastle, come and visit The Anna Miller Museum. Also the landmarks such as the Court House and The Old Mill Inn. Newcastle has been affected a lot
Newcastle has been affected a lot by the War in Iraq and national and international natural disasters. For an example, When the Untied States went to war with Iraq, the gas prices went up because business’s were afraid that the supply of gas, that mostly comes from the middle east area, would be diminished.
Globalization is a process that has been going on for a long time. It was introduced to society four or five centuries ago, globalization is important because it is able to spread within countries and through out the world, it is very important because it not only grows it also spreads.
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